This is the kind of dry humor that you’re not sure anyone else will like but you put it out there and see what happens. It’s the kind of strange debate you have with yourself that means more or less nothing as everyone will like this cartoon just about as much as any other cartoon you’ve made.
I like the visual simplicity of it but I could’ve done a bit better with the hand on the right. It’s a little too small and doesn’t form to the bar as it should.
Otherwise it’s a nice simple composition and I think the flailing vein and the undead flesh bits help to convey a certain sense of motion without using motion lines.